MAC 5 - Prelim

For our Prelim, we decided to use lyrics from the Bohemian Rhapsody because we found it difficult to think of something to say, this helped us develop the idea that, in our two minute film opening, we need to spend more time on dialogue choice so that the audience is more gripped to the film.
The Prelim helped us improve our understanding of continuity and we tried our hardest to keep hand and chair placement the same so it looked realistic.
Reflecting on it, we could have definitely improved our Prelim as at approximately 0:04; you can hear the sound of River zooming in, which could suggest that we were quite careless about the verisimilitude.
I kept smiling and looking away from the camera which made it seem quite unprofessional and I have learnt that when filming, our facial expressions must be serious and we have to keep eye contact with the person being spoken too to ensure realism is achieved.