We had a discussion in lesson about whether a cleaner version of our opening would be more effective. By this, we mean that our opening would not include swear words such as "Shit!" which is especially emphasised in it as it is the only line of dialogue throughout.
We showed our original draft with swearing to a couple of our peers and asked whether they liked it or thought it would be better without and after thorough discussion and feedback from a variety of people, we decided that the use of swearing made the panic more effective and made more sense in the context of our idea.
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